This is a great start to the visual essay! The topic is a great choice, it is a very current problem that should be addressed more. I find that this topic will help others to be aware of the problem. However, I would recommend a more specific example or two, as it will be easier to write about as we only have so many words. For example, where you mentioned the censorship of sex workers and/or the LGBTQ community, were specific examples that you could go more in-depth with. However, it is a great start and can’t wait to read it when it’s done!
Erin Waugh 
This is a great start to the visual essay! The topic is a great choice, it is a very current problem that should be addressed more. I find that this topic will help others to be aware of the problem. However, I would recommend a more specific example or two, as it will be easier to write about as we only have so many words. For example, where you mentioned the censorship of sex workers and/or the LGBTQ community, were specific examples that you could go more in-depth with. However, it is a great start and can’t wait to read it when it’s done!
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